Please comment on some of the aspects that you like about this digital story.
Also comment on any changes that you would recommend that I make to this digital story.
Hi Anthony, I like the scratch choices and background. It's disappointing your digital story is only two sentences long. Add more people or sound effects to make it interesting.
Hi Anthony, I think you can add more action and words, because you have been put on two words. You also can addd three or four people and add more interesting words, and you just add small sentence like " ahhhh". ANy you have done a great job
8 comments:
Wow that was really short
Try next time to add a little more sentences and it was cool when he was going for the dunk.
From Amato
thats alright but put some action in it movement instead of just talking and people not moveing
Hi Anthony
I understand that you just started, but can you make a chair for the guy with purple pants?
Hi Anthony,
I like the scratch choices and background. It's disappointing your digital story is only two sentences long. Add more people or sound effects to make it interesting.
Hi Anthony,
I think you can add more action and words, because you have been put on two words. You also can addd three or four people and add more interesting words, and you just add small sentence like " ahhhh". ANy you have done a great job
Hi Anthony
I really liked your story. I liked how you tried your hardest to get a good story.
Hey Anthony
I think that you should have more details in you scratch. Keep up The Good Work
Hi Anthony
I really liked your story.
But maybe you could add more sentences
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